Hi there! This is a lovely photo. I love how the light falls on the back of the model. This light contrasts nicely with the background of the photo. This would not have been possible had the model's hair not been tied up the way it is. The way she is looking, it makes the viewer feel as though she is looking at it and this affects the viewer. The effect is accentuated with makeup around the eye. The fact that the photo is in black and white adds a certain mood to it.
Good job mate.